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
 Tone and mood are literary elements integrated
into literary works, but can also be included into
any piece of writing.
 Identifying the tone and mood in literature is
very important to truly understanding what an
author is trying to say and can be helpful in
helping to discern the theme and author’s style.
Students often mix up the two terms and can
become confused.
2
TONE

Tone is the AUTHOR’S attitude
towards the audience, the subject, or
the character.
*Tone is shown through

 Dialogue - talking
 Descriptions – author’s diction
[word choice]

3
Words that describe
TONE


4
MOOD


*Mood is the feeling the reader gets
from a story.
*Mood is shown through
 Setting
 Atmosphere
5
Words to describe
MOOD


6
TONE IS NOT MOOD

Tone

The tone could be
serious but the
mood could be
ridiculous.

Mood
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TONE IS NOT MOOD

 FOR EXAMPLE:

He approached the task with sheer
determination. He had studied his plans
carefully, spent hours preparing and was sure
of his approach. The hours he spent
practicing were grueling and exhausting but
he was ready. This was the year he would win
the pie eating contest at school.
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 FOR EXAMPLE:

TONE


He approached the task with sheer determination. He had
studied his plans carefully, spent hours preparing and
was sure of his approach. The hours he spent practicing
were grueling and exhausting but he was ready. This
was the year he would win the pie eating contest at
school.

According to the author’s descriptions, what is the
tone?
Serious, Intense, Formal, Focused
9
 FOR EXAMPLE:

MOOD


He approached the task with sheer determination. He had
studied his plans carefully, spent hours preparing and
was sure of his approach. The hours he spent practicing
were grueling and exhausting but he was ready. This
was the year he would win the pie eating contest at
school.

According to the setting, what is the mood?
Playful, informal, silly, exciting
10
You Try!


On the following slides identify the author’s tone or the
reader’s mood and explain how you knew.

Remember:
Tone is determined by
DESCRIPTION or DIALOGUE
Mood is determined by
SETTING or ATMOSPHERE

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The TONE of the passage is _________
The author’s ______________ relays the tone.



My annoying brother likes to drive me crazy.
There is no other who is that lazy.
He whines to Mom and Dad night and day
Until he eventually gets his way.
What is a sister to do
When he screams 'til he's blue?
There is no way to win,
For he gets under your skin.
He does his best to kill all joy.
Oh, how my brother does annoy!
12
The TONE of the passage is FRUSTRATED
The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.



My annoying brother likes to drive me crazy.
There is no other who is that lazy.
He whines to Mom and Dad night and day
Until he eventually gets his way.
What is a sister to do
When he screams 'til he's blue?
There is no way to win,
For he gets under your skin.
He does his best to kill all joy.
Oh, how my brother does annoy!
13
The TONE of the passage is _____________
The author’s _______________ relays the tone.


There is no one
That can be better
Because you are brilliant.
There is nothing
That you cannot you do
Because you are unbeatable.
There is no place
That you cannot go
Because you are always welcomed.
There is no person
That can hold you back

14
The TONE of the passage is INSPIRING
The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.



There is no one
That can be better
Because you are brilliant.
There is nothing
That you cannot you do
Because you are unbeatable.
There is no place
That you cannot go
Because you are always welcomed.
There is no person
That can hold you back

15
The MOOD of the passage is ______________
The ______________ relays the MOOD.


The door swings open to reveal all of my family
members standing around the Christmas
tree. The lights are twinkling and the
fireplace is roaring with a warm fire.
Everyone is singing Christmas carols as the
snow falls quietly outside the window.

16
The MOOD of the passage is
COZY/FAMILIAR
The ATMOSPHERE relays the mood.



The door swings open to reveal all of my family 
members standing around the Christmas tree. 
The lights are twinkling and the fireplace is 
roaring with a warm fire. Everyone is singing 
Christmas carols as the snow falls quietly 
outside the window. 

17
The MOOD of the passage is ______________
The ______________ relays the MOOD.


The door swings open to reveal a Christmas 
tree, alone in the middle of the room, 
sparkling with hundreds of lights. Silence 
greets me as I glance around the room.  The 
fireplace is empty and the snow storm howls 
outside the window. My family has gone and I 
am left alone with my thoughts. 

18
The MOOD of the passage is
GLOOMY/LONELY
The ATMOSPHERE relays the MOOD.



The door swings open to reveal a Christmas 
tree, alone in the middle of the room, 
sparkling with hundreds of lights. Silence 
greets me as I glance around the room.  The 
fireplace is empty and the snow storm howls 
outside the window. My family has gone and 
I am left alone with my thoughts. 

19
The TONE of the passage is ____________
The author’s _____________ relay the tone.


We’re contacting you today to let you know
about the Special Olympics annual fund drive.
You have been kind enough to support us
generously in the past, and we’d like to ask
for your help again, as we send our athletes
with special needs to compete at the national
level. Please fill out the form below and
return it in the enclosed envelope with your
donation. It will make a child’s day if you
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do.
The TONE of the passage is
FORMAL/POLITE.
The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.



We’re contacting you today to let you know
about the Special Olympics annual fund
drive. You’ve been kind enough to support
us generously in the past, and we’d like to
ask for your help again, as we send our
athletes with special needs to compete at the
national level. Please fill out the form
below and return it in the enclosed envelope
with your donation. It will make a child’s
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day if you do.
The MOOD of the passage is ____________
The ____________ relays the MOOD.


The gym of the high school was brightly 
decorated. The red and white streamers 
covered the walls and heart shapes were 
scattered all over the floor. Red glitter was 
thrown on all the tables and love songs were 
playing in the background. The Valentine’s 
dance was about to begin.

22
The MOOD of the passage is ROMANTIC
The SETTING relays the MOOD.


The gym of the high school was brightly 
decorated. The red and white streamers 
covered the walls and heart shapes were 
scattered all over the floor. Red glitter was 
thrown on all the tables and love songs were 
playing in the background. The Valentine’s 
dance was about to begin.

23
The TONE of the passage is ____________
The author’s _____________ relay the tone.


We received your request for a refund for
your recent purchase of a telescope for
your son. Please accept our sincere
apologies that the product did not
function as advertised. We will process
the refund in as timely a manner as
possible. In the meantime, if we can
help you in any other way, please ask.
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The TONE of the passage is
APOLOGETIC/PROFESSIONAL
The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.



We received your request for a refund for your
recent purchase of a telescope for your son.
Please accept our sincere apologies that the
product did not function as advertised. We
will process the refund in as timely a manner
as possible. In the meantime, if we can help
you in any other way, please ask.

25
The MOOD of the passage is ______________
The ______________ relays the MOOD.


The night it happened was one we will never 
forget. The wind was screeching outside as 
rain pounded against the window. We had 
lost electricity hours ago and had nothing but 
candles to light the house. The battery 
powered radio we had was broadcasting a 
warning to lock your doors and stay inside; 
there was a killer on the loose. 
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The MOOD of the passage is
SCARY/SUSPENSEFUL
The ATMOSPHERE/SETTING relays the MOOD.



The night it happened was one we will never 
forget. The wind was screeching outside as 
rain pounded against the window. We had 
lost electricity hours ago and had nothing but 
candles to light the house. The battery 
powered radio we had was broadcasting a 
warning to lock your doors and stay inside; 
there was a killer on the loose. 
27
The TONE of the passage is ______________
The author’s _______________ relay the tone.


Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it 
all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet 
apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls 
were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her 
mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare 
sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting 
on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla 
candles comforted her aching heart.

28
The TONE of the passage is SAD/HEART
BROKEN
The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.



Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it 
all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet 
apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls 
were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her 
mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare 
sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting 
on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla 
candles comforted her aching heart.

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The MOOD of the passage is ______________.
The ______________ relays the mood.



Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it 
all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet 
apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls 
were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her 
mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare 
sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting 
on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla 
candles comforted her aching heart.

30
The MOOD of the passage is COMFORTING.
The SETTING relays the mood.


Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it 
all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet 
apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls 
were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her 
mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare 
sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting 
on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla 
candles comforted her aching heart.

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The TONE of the passage is ___________.
The _________________ relays the TONE.


“Would you be so kind as to help me with my 
groceries?” asked the elderly woman.
“Not a problem ma’am,” replied the young man, 
“I would be happy to help.”

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The TONE of the passage is POLITE.
The DIALOGUE relays the TONE.


“Would you be so kind as to help me with my 
groceries?” asked the elderly woman.
“Not a problem ma’am,” replied the young man, 
“I would be happy to help.”

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Mood and tone

  • 1. 1
  • 2.   Tone and mood are literary elements integrated into literary works, but can also be included into any piece of writing.  Identifying the tone and mood in literature is very important to truly understanding what an author is trying to say and can be helpful in helping to discern the theme and author’s style. Students often mix up the two terms and can become confused. 2
  • 3. TONE  Tone is the AUTHOR’S attitude towards the audience, the subject, or the character. *Tone is shown through  Dialogue - talking  Descriptions – author’s diction [word choice] 3
  • 5. MOOD  *Mood is the feeling the reader gets from a story. *Mood is shown through  Setting  Atmosphere 5
  • 7. TONE IS NOT MOOD  Tone The tone could be serious but the mood could be ridiculous. Mood 7
  • 8. TONE IS NOT MOOD   FOR EXAMPLE: He approached the task with sheer determination. He had studied his plans carefully, spent hours preparing and was sure of his approach. The hours he spent practicing were grueling and exhausting but he was ready. This was the year he would win the pie eating contest at school. 8
  • 9.  FOR EXAMPLE: TONE  He approached the task with sheer determination. He had studied his plans carefully, spent hours preparing and was sure of his approach. The hours he spent practicing were grueling and exhausting but he was ready. This was the year he would win the pie eating contest at school. According to the author’s descriptions, what is the tone? Serious, Intense, Formal, Focused 9
  • 10.  FOR EXAMPLE: MOOD  He approached the task with sheer determination. He had studied his plans carefully, spent hours preparing and was sure of his approach. The hours he spent practicing were grueling and exhausting but he was ready. This was the year he would win the pie eating contest at school. According to the setting, what is the mood? Playful, informal, silly, exciting 10
  • 11. You Try!  On the following slides identify the author’s tone or the reader’s mood and explain how you knew. Remember: Tone is determined by DESCRIPTION or DIALOGUE Mood is determined by SETTING or ATMOSPHERE 11
  • 12. The TONE of the passage is _________ The author’s ______________ relays the tone.  My annoying brother likes to drive me crazy. There is no other who is that lazy. He whines to Mom and Dad night and day Until he eventually gets his way. What is a sister to do When he screams 'til he's blue? There is no way to win, For he gets under your skin. He does his best to kill all joy. Oh, how my brother does annoy! 12
  • 13. The TONE of the passage is FRUSTRATED The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.  My annoying brother likes to drive me crazy. There is no other who is that lazy. He whines to Mom and Dad night and day Until he eventually gets his way. What is a sister to do When he screams 'til he's blue? There is no way to win, For he gets under your skin. He does his best to kill all joy. Oh, how my brother does annoy! 13
  • 14. The TONE of the passage is _____________ The author’s _______________ relays the tone.  There is no one That can be better Because you are brilliant. There is nothing That you cannot you do Because you are unbeatable. There is no place That you cannot go Because you are always welcomed. There is no person That can hold you back 14
  • 15. The TONE of the passage is INSPIRING The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.  There is no one That can be better Because you are brilliant. There is nothing That you cannot you do Because you are unbeatable. There is no place That you cannot go Because you are always welcomed. There is no person That can hold you back 15
  • 16. The MOOD of the passage is ______________ The ______________ relays the MOOD.  The door swings open to reveal all of my family members standing around the Christmas tree. The lights are twinkling and the fireplace is roaring with a warm fire. Everyone is singing Christmas carols as the snow falls quietly outside the window. 16
  • 17. The MOOD of the passage is COZY/FAMILIAR The ATMOSPHERE relays the mood.  The door swings open to reveal all of my family  members standing around the Christmas tree.  The lights are twinkling and the fireplace is  roaring with a warm fire. Everyone is singing  Christmas carols as the snow falls quietly  outside the window.  17
  • 18. The MOOD of the passage is ______________ The ______________ relays the MOOD.  The door swings open to reveal a Christmas  tree, alone in the middle of the room,  sparkling with hundreds of lights. Silence  greets me as I glance around the room.  The  fireplace is empty and the snow storm howls  outside the window. My family has gone and I  am left alone with my thoughts.  18
  • 19. The MOOD of the passage is GLOOMY/LONELY The ATMOSPHERE relays the MOOD.  The door swings open to reveal a Christmas  tree, alone in the middle of the room,  sparkling with hundreds of lights. Silence  greets me as I glance around the room.  The  fireplace is empty and the snow storm howls  outside the window. My family has gone and  I am left alone with my thoughts.  19
  • 20. The TONE of the passage is ____________ The author’s _____________ relay the tone.  We’re contacting you today to let you know about the Special Olympics annual fund drive. You have been kind enough to support us generously in the past, and we’d like to ask for your help again, as we send our athletes with special needs to compete at the national level. Please fill out the form below and return it in the enclosed envelope with your donation. It will make a child’s day if you 20 do.
  • 21. The TONE of the passage is FORMAL/POLITE. The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.  We’re contacting you today to let you know about the Special Olympics annual fund drive. You’ve been kind enough to support us generously in the past, and we’d like to ask for your help again, as we send our athletes with special needs to compete at the national level. Please fill out the form below and return it in the enclosed envelope with your donation. It will make a child’s 21 day if you do.
  • 22. The MOOD of the passage is ____________ The ____________ relays the MOOD.  The gym of the high school was brightly  decorated. The red and white streamers  covered the walls and heart shapes were  scattered all over the floor. Red glitter was  thrown on all the tables and love songs were  playing in the background. The Valentine’s  dance was about to begin. 22
  • 23. The MOOD of the passage is ROMANTIC The SETTING relays the MOOD.  The gym of the high school was brightly  decorated. The red and white streamers  covered the walls and heart shapes were  scattered all over the floor. Red glitter was  thrown on all the tables and love songs were  playing in the background. The Valentine’s  dance was about to begin. 23
  • 24. The TONE of the passage is ____________ The author’s _____________ relay the tone.  We received your request for a refund for your recent purchase of a telescope for your son. Please accept our sincere apologies that the product did not function as advertised. We will process the refund in as timely a manner as possible. In the meantime, if we can help you in any other way, please ask. 24
  • 25. The TONE of the passage is APOLOGETIC/PROFESSIONAL The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.  We received your request for a refund for your recent purchase of a telescope for your son. Please accept our sincere apologies that the product did not function as advertised. We will process the refund in as timely a manner as possible. In the meantime, if we can help you in any other way, please ask. 25
  • 26. The MOOD of the passage is ______________ The ______________ relays the MOOD.  The night it happened was one we will never  forget. The wind was screeching outside as  rain pounded against the window. We had  lost electricity hours ago and had nothing but  candles to light the house. The battery  powered radio we had was broadcasting a  warning to lock your doors and stay inside;  there was a killer on the loose.  26
  • 27. The MOOD of the passage is SCARY/SUSPENSEFUL The ATMOSPHERE/SETTING relays the MOOD.  The night it happened was one we will never  forget. The wind was screeching outside as  rain pounded against the window. We had  lost electricity hours ago and had nothing but  candles to light the house. The battery  powered radio we had was broadcasting a  warning to lock your doors and stay inside;  there was a killer on the loose.  27
  • 28. The TONE of the passage is ______________ The author’s _______________ relay the tone.  Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it  all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet  apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls  were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her  mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare  sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting  on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla  candles comforted her aching heart. 28
  • 29. The TONE of the passage is SAD/HEART BROKEN The author’s DESCRIPTIONS relay the tone.  Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it  all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet  apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls  were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her  mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare  sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting  on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla  candles comforted her aching heart. 29
  • 30. The MOOD of the passage is ______________. The ______________ relays the mood.  Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it  all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet  apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls  were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her  mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare  sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting  on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla  candles comforted her aching heart. 30
  • 31. The MOOD of the passage is COMFORTING. The SETTING relays the mood.  Lola sat on the old, lumpy couch crying. She could let it  all out here, alone in her mother’s small, quiet  apartment in Galesburg, Illinois. The familiar walls  were covered in rose pink wallpaper. Goldie, her  mother’s eleventh fish, seemed to stare  sympathetically at Lola through the fishbowl sitting  on the counter. The smell of her mother’s vanilla  candles comforted her aching heart. 31
  • 32. The TONE of the passage is ___________. The _________________ relays the TONE.  “Would you be so kind as to help me with my  groceries?” asked the elderly woman. “Not a problem ma’am,” replied the young man,  “I would be happy to help.” 32
  • 33. The TONE of the passage is POLITE. The DIALOGUE relays the TONE.  “Would you be so kind as to help me with my  groceries?” asked the elderly woman. “Not a problem ma’am,” replied the young man,  “I would be happy to help.” 33